The problem is in order to keep track
of all of your appointments and assignments that are due. For people
that use multiple devices this means that every important date must
be entered separately on each device. This is time consuming. My
company, TimeTrac is going to develop a cross platform app that can
be updated from one platform to another without without having to
enter the information separately on each device.
Hi Gregory,
ReplyDeleteNice job. It was excellent how you included your company name "TimeTrac", suited up and dressed to impress, and explained the problem and the solution concisely. Practice makes perfect so definitely keep practicing and work on infusing more passion and a hook into the pitch, like was shown in the "How To" videos for elevator pitches under "Start Here" in Canvas. Keep up the good work.
-TA
Hi Gregory,
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch! It seemed like you were very poised and relaxed throughout the recording. It definitely shows in your stance and the way you spoke. Also, great idea as well. I definitely need a app like this so I can make into appointments and remember to turn stuff in on time!
If you have the time, please check out my elevator pitch and comment on how I can become better! I look forward to running into your post again throughout the semester.
http://flatpeak.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-1.html
Brian Do Kim